Talk:1989 Football League Fourth Division play-off final/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 22:07, 14 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Shall review MWright96 (talk) 22:07, 14 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Wikilink cross to the relevant article for non-Football readers
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"Leyton Orient finished the regular 1988–89 season in sixth place in the Football League Fourth Division – the fourth tier of the English football league system – one place and four points ahead of Wrexham." - repetition of "place"
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Darren Wright put the home side into the lead after two minutes when he scored from a free kick" - whose's free kick?
Sources don't say. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"Both sides had won their away game in the matches between the sides during the regular season:" - repetition of "sides"
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Just a note, is the one paragraph for both legs that really all the information that is available?
Early days play-offs at this level of English football received scant coverage. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"and headed in a cross." - from who?
The source mentions three players but doesn't make it clear which of them played the final ball in. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"Frank Clark, the winning manager said" - shouldn't there be another comma after the word "manager"?
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Wiklink Heathrow Airport
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Reference 11 "Orient's revival on course" has the incorrect publication date
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
~~Reference 12 "Orient up" is missing the page number~~
Is it? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Struck MWright96 (talk) 20:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 06:54, 15 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 thanks, I've addressed and responded to your comments above. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:13, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Now promoting to GA class MWright96 (talk) 20:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]