Talk:1993 Football League First Division play-off final/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:52, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 17:52, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

1994-94 season should be 1993–94 season
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 19:56, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Taylor and Thompson should have their first names included on the first mention
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 19:56, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Wikilink Chelsea to Chelsea F.C.
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 19:56, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Wikilink penalty to Penalty kick (association football)
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 19:56, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps wikilink the mention of the word Premiership in the third paragraph to 1994–95 FA Premier League?
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 19:56, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"Maskell equalised before Swindon took Hoddle" - I'm not sure what the bold text is trying to say; perhaps a little rewording is in order?
Removed "Swindon took". The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 19:58, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"It was the only goal of the game with the match ending 1–0." - how about It was the only goal of the match with it ending 1–0.
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 19:58, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"which was played over two legs had ended 2–2, and had played in the second tier since that promotion." - close repetition of the term "played"
Split. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:00, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"the club's promotion was overturned by the Football League as a result of financial irregularities, and the club" - close repetition of the word "club"
Repeat removed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:00, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"from Maskell found Hoddle who shot was curled" - whose
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:02, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Mitchell then saw his shot smothered" - by whom?
Source doesn't say. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:02, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Wikilink the final mention of the term Premiership in this section to 1994–95 FA Premier League
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:04, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Eurosport listed the match as 94th best association football match" - close repetition of the same word as highlighted in bold
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:04, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"as 94th best association football match" - as the 94th
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:04, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

All The Guardian sources should include the |via=Newspapers.com field
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:09, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Every BNA reference should be marked with |url-access=subscription
Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:09, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 30 is missing the publication date
Not sure that's true, perhaps it was fixed after your review? The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:09, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- I was referring to the Eurosport source that's now been deleted. Since it has bee removed, this point is no longer than issue. MWright96 (talk) 05:43, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 19:08, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 thanks so much for your review, I've addressed and responded to all of your comments above. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:09, 24 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 05:43, 25 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]