Talk:Girls Just Wanna Have Fun (Xena: Warrior Princess)/GA1

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The article looks good, but it needs some work before I can pass it as a Good Article. Here's my comments:

  • Split the first sentence of the lead into two sentences. Also, can you add what network it aired on?
  • "second season of the TV television series"
  • The lead is a bit short, could you expand it a little?
  • Bacchus plots to turn Xena into an "eternal bacchae." – the full stop should be outside of the quotation marks.
  • "Gabrielle is about to drink Bacchus's blood"
  • which was filmed in Auckland, New Zealand"
  • "In one scene, Orpheus's head is attached"
  • be considered "maintext." – the full stop should be outside of the quotation marks.
  • "general lesbian eroticism in Xena:Warrior Princess was" – there should be a space between "Xena:" and "Warrior".
  • looking at Xena with "hungry eyes." – the full stop should be outside of the quotation marks.
  • Is "woments" a spelling mistake?
  • "Rob Lineberger of DVDVerdict.com DVD Verdict"
  • "Orpheus's head being paraded"
  • Infobox: "Xena holds Orpheus's severed head"
  • The following are disambiguation pages: Bacchus and Gabrielle.

I'll put the article on hold for seven days so that you can fix this. Good luck! :) TheLeftorium 20:15, 9 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the detailed review. I think I have fixed the issues you've mentioned. - Peregrine Fisher (talk) (contribs) 04:51, 10 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Nice work, I will pass the article now! TheLeftorium 14:59, 10 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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