Talk:Head over Heels (American TV series)/GA1
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:36, 28 July 2018 (UTC)
- I'll take this one on. Courcelles (talk) 16:36, 28 July 2018 (UTC)
- "August 26, 1997, to October 28, 1997." We can lose this comma.
- You mentioned who performed the supporting roles in the lead, but not who the leads were played by.
- "(pictured in 1960s)" the 1960's
- Going to need immediately following refs for "had chosen Head Over Heels for production due to Stevens. However, the network removed the actress from the project due to "a creative change" both sentences.
- MOS says "1997–98" should be "1997–1998" Recent and, IMO, stupid change.
- Otherwise this looks good. Courcelles (talk) 16:48, 28 July 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review! I believe that I have addressed everything. Have a great rest of your day and/or night. Aoba47 (talk) 17:58, 28 July 2018 (UTC)
- Promoted, enjoy your day, too! Courcelles (talk) 18:34, 28 July 2018 (UTC)