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To Do List[edit]

St Kilda FC (2/18)[edit]

  • Expansion of Home Grounds Section. Focus on History of the Grounds and their relevance to the club.  Done
  • Create a "Supporters" section Done
    • Source information about demographics of the Saint's supporter base Done
    • Number One Ticket Holders? Done
    • Move Membership/Attendence there and condense the table.  Done
  • Add Sponsorships to Corporate section.  Done
  • History Cleanup Done
    • Condense the section on 2000 - 2011. 2009 and 2010 are areas of focus.  Done
    • Synthesise the dot point format (In XXXX, Y happened.) into proper paragraphs. Done
    • Remove Recentism Template  Done
  • Add Media to the History section of the page Not done
  • Fix the Hall of Fame stuff. The current dot point table split is silly. Done
  • Add a Partnership section, include information about the China partnership in conjuction with Port Adelaide. Done
  • Referencing (Pagewide) Done
  • Spelling and Grammar checks Done
  • Nominate for Good Article Status Done
  • Get the article passed! Pending

Sydney Swans (3/18)[edit]

  • Lead Changes
    • Split Premierships and Foundation VFL member Done
    • Move the reserves mention to below the Foundation VFL member in the same paragraph. Done
    • Add information such as colours behind the grounds at the bottom.style="background: #FFD; vertical-align: middle; text-align: center; " class="partial table-partial"|Pending
    • Remove Recency section for after 2000 etc, as it's not relevant to the club as a whole like a lead should be. SHould be left with four paragraphs - Intro, Foundation VFL, Premiership and Other. Done
    • Remove references if covered elsewhere per Leadcite Done
  • History Changes
    • Merge the two history sections! Done
      • Furthermore, change the time blocks to better points of significance.
    • Pre-Sydney history.
      • Add more to pre-history sections. In particular - the entry to the VFL (which is a single sentence!). All five need doing, but this is the worst.
      • Could be worth carving out a new section for the 70s individually. Swans made the finals in 1970 for the first time in ages, and were saddled with huge debts. Worth noting seperate.
      • Merge Origins and VFA, VFL entry and first premierships. Make the split after WW1, say 1920 - then split again Post-WW2 for the unsuccessfuly period.
      • Remove Media from the pre-history, possibly relocate to elsewhere in the article.
    • Post-Sydney history
      • Cut Back
        • What is the most important, and what isn't?
          • Player Information is 100% not important, especially the way it lists out numerous players.
          • Extreme detail on unremarkable events, such as the John Longmire section having 3 paragrapahs on 2015 (where the Swans did not make the Grand Final)
          • The most detail should be on 2012 and 2005, particularly the latter due to its role.
      • Remove some media again
    • AFLW needs its own section
  • Club Identity
    • Remove the Sponsors from the text. They can have their own section.
    • Guernsey Table
    • Add Club Logo Section
    • Port doesn't need a mention in the club song section. They used the same tune, but so do many low level teams. It's not relevant to the Swan, it's relevant to the song.
    • Cover the history of the Swans' home grounds/training bases. We have the SCG, but no others like Lake Oval.
  • Rivalries
    • Update the Sydney Derby. Feel like it could do with a little more text to buff it out slightly.
    • West Coast-Sydney is dead. Make note of this in the section.
    • Photo Quality is very poor. Replacement or Removal?
    • Is Hawthorn-Sydney still alive? Also, remove recency. Hawthorn and Sydney were uncompetitive for many of the same years (50s, 60s), is there anything relevant there?
  • Players
    • Combine Reserves team into this section. Done
      • Maybe cut back on the prose for the reserves team. Good that they've got their own section, no need to go overboard for their reserves though.
    • Remove duplicate Corporate members??? Done
  • Corporate
    • Add the Sponsors here. Can add a table if needbe, but not a priority.
  • Supporters
    • Text looks fine, but it may need weeding. Won't rule out changing it to focus more on fanbase demographics ala St Kilda.
    • Add Number One Ticket Holders
    • Standardise the Membership-Attendance table.
  • Partnerships
    • Are there any? St Kilda and Sydney played in Wellington, could be a possible mention. Pride match, if it's a partnership?
  • Honour Boards
    • Change the Honour Board as per other articles
    • Team of the Century + Hall of Fame + Military Service if applicable
  • Achievements
    • Club Done
      • Remove the Nil sections. Completely uneeded, it's to show achievement and having Nil is pointless. Done
    • Individiual
      • Formatting is atrocious. Must fix. Done
      • Remove the headings and replace with bold text. Done
      • If required, add more medals
    • All Australian
      • Add it! The Port Page version should be relevant as South Melbourne players qualified.
  • Records
    • Move to a seperate page/link to a seperate page. Brings too much clutter. Pending
  • Media Done
    • Remove Media Section. Largely irrelevant to the club Done
  • See Also Done
    • Remove irrelavant links, add relevant ones. Done
  • Notes Done
    • Add this section Done
  • External Links
    • Why does it link to that documentary? Check it out, use as a ref if needed, and remove.
  • Whole Article
    • Referencing
    • Improve usage of encyclopedic language.
    • Reorder sections - Players move up to below club identity as an example Done
    • Spelling/Grammar
  • NOMINATE FOR GA

Gold Coast Suns (4/18)[edit]

  • Generalised Page Cleanup
    • Combine 2009-2011 seasons as 'Foundation'
      • Remove the templates regarding the inaugural teams, which are largely irrelevant.
      • Combine Recruitment and the above new Foundation section
    • Combine Stadium and Club Symbols
    • Remove Coaching Staff section
    • Combine the three honour boards under one universal section
    • Group the three squads (AFL, Reserves and AFLW) under one 'Players' section'
    • Move Club Records below Club Achievements
  • Expand Individual Awards.
  • Do the Suns have a Hall of Fame? If so, combine it with the honour board section.
  • Create a new supporter section
    • Include information about the supporter coverage of the Suns across QLD
    • Add the Suns TV information to this section
  • Condense the size of the Carrara section. Make note of any deals they've had (i.e Cazaly)
  • Add a Partnership section, include information about the China partnership in conjuction with Port Adelaide.
  • Add 2020/21 info if pertinent
    • Are other season results (like 2015) important? If not, remove them.
  • Referencing
  • Nominate for Good Article Status