Wikipedia:WikiProject Film/Peer review/Mulholland Drive (film)

Mulholland Drive (film)[edit]

I saw this movie about 2 weeks ago or so and it intoxicated me. So I did my best to read everything I could and added to the article accordingly. I would like to know its potential for FA, since I've not written a film article to this extent before. I would like to know what to add, remove, alter, clean up, and clarify. Your assistance is appreciated, and thank you for reading the article. --Moni3 (talk) 12:42, 10 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Very well written, with extensive referencing, and an attempt to establish a neutral voice being successful. My minor concerns remain that there is an inconsistency in dating and citation formats. A final assessment may have to wait since I am recusing myself from a full review. FWiW Bzuk (talk) 17:30, 12 April 2008 (UTC).[reply]

Noted about inconsistencies in formatting citations. I'm going to have it go through LOCE for punctuation and prose, and ask someone to assist with going over references before FAC. I appreciate your time and input, Bzuk. --Moni3 (talk) 17:51, 12 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]