Draft:Erich Dublon/ReimyLi Peer Review

General info
Madisonokon
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Madisonokon/Erich_Dublon?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Lead
The lead provides a concise and accurate overview of the article. It includes a brief description of all sections.

Tone and Balance
All content added is done so in a neutral tone. The section on the SS St. Louis is a bit longer than the rest, but not by much. Perhaps sub-sections could be added to it.

Sources and References
There are citation links in every sentence/every other sentence, and a range of sources that are being cited, which are both good for a Wikipedia article!

Organization
Content is extremely well written, being very concise, clear, and easy to read. There don't appear to be any grammatical or spelling errors. Content is also well organized.

Images and Media
Images and media of the SS St. Louis, Erich Dublon, his family, or a map of sorts would enhance the article :)

For New Articles Only
The article meets Wikipedia's Notability requirements, and has an exhaustive list of sources. There are not links to other Wikipedia articles, which may be helpful.

Overall impressions
Overall, this is a great draft! There isn't really much for me to talk about in terms of improving content, but for formatting adding links to other relevant Wikipedia articles would be great. Adding images would also bring your article to another level!