Draft talk:Bradley Freid updates

updates to the page
the page has been submitted to be updated and i have been through the channels to explain that i have been asked to do this by the subject as his profile is out of date and people keep asking him why.


 * What I think should be changed:

Request 1

For the introduction paragraph - please can it change From - Sir Bradley Fried (born 12 August 1965[1]) is a South African-British businessman. He is the chairman of Goldman Sachs International.[2] He co-founded Grovepoint Capital, prior to which he was chief executive of Investec Bank Plc, and previously served as chairman of the Court of the Bank of England.[3] He was previously also a non-executive board member of the Financial Conduct Authority.[4]

Changed to:

Sir Bradley Fried (born 12 August 1965[1]) is a South African-British businessman. He is currently CEO Of Ki Corporation having previously been chairman of Goldman Sachs International.[2] He co-founded Grovepoint Capital, prior to which he was chief executive of Investec Bank Plc, and previously served as chairman of the Court of the Bank of England.[3] He was previously also a non-executive board member of the Financial Conduct Authority.[4]

Request 2

Under Career - Please replace - Fried has been appointed Chair of Goldman Sachs International with effect from February 2023.[13]

to

Fried was appointed Chair of Goldman Sachs International with effect from February 2023, and left the role to join Ki Corporation in May 2024.[13]

Request 3

In addition - would it be possible to remove the warning at the top of the page?


 * Why it should be changed: for Request 1 - Sir Bradley's role is changing and its been all over the news - see supporting links below. As Wikipedia comes up as the first search for his name online we wanted this to be accurate.

For request 2 - the same reason applies

Request 3 - t this page comes up for the first search under his name and therefore we wanted it to be both clean and accurate if possible -especially as we are being transparent in our request.


 * References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button):

See all relevant links below

Sir Bradley Fried (born 12 August 1965[1]) is a South African-British businessman. He is currently CEO of Ki Corporation having previously been chairman of Goldman Sachs International.[2] He co-founded Grovepoint Capital, prior to which he was chief executive of Investec Bank Plc, and previously served as chairman of the Court of the Bank of England.[3] He was previously also a non-executive board member of the Financial Conduct Authority.[4]

Fried was appointed Chair of Goldman Sachs International with effect from February 2023, and left the role to join Ki Corporation in May 2024.[13]

2A00:23C5:390:2C01:74F8:CA06:37BD:110B (talk) 15:55, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[ reply]

References


 * Not done – please clarify Please make your request in the form of "please change X to Y", using proper wiki markup and templates. Thank you. P,TO 19104 (talk) (contribs) 19:48, 27 May 2024 (UTC)

2A00:23C5:390:2C01:B86B:50F:2EBE:6E7F (talk) 12:29, 3 June 2024 (UTC)

I have tried to submit a new page and also make the changes but it was declined again - can any one help me make the simple changes needed? 2A00:23C5:390:2C01:B86B:50F:2EBE:6E7F (talk) 13:08, 3 June 2024 (UTC)