Draft talk:Domain separation

Definition
The definition is very convoluted. The idea is simple, "Domain separation is an efficient means to construct different function instances from a single underlying function" (italics is mine). My proposal is to use something similar and refer to this book as a source. Dimawik (talk) 00:35, 26 January 2024 (UTC)

Title
A message to the reviewer: my proposal is to put the article into the main spaces as Domain separation (cryptography) (over the redirect) to avoid future moves. See my comment at Redirects for discussion/Log/2024 January 25 for details. Dimawik (talk) 01:08, 26 January 2024 (UTC)

Inner-Wikipedia link
Hello! While I don't have much to add, I think you may be able to link keying material (which doesn't have a page yet) to "Key (cryptography)" by doing keying material, as it contains some information on that. Very interesting topic you've written about. Dalmationrotary (talk) 08:20, 27 March 2024 (UTC)

Original research
I do not see much OR in this draft as-is. The text can certainly be improved (for example, it is not written in encyclopedic style in some places), but currently the draft contains sourced statements interspersed with common-sense explanations that are not sourced - but can be without too much effort. It would be very helpful if you would add cn in the places that make you uneasy, so the cites can be added there. Thank you in advance! Dimawik (talk) 06:34, 22 April 2024 (UTC)