Draft talk:Eye Movement Desensitization and Reprocessing

Feedback on your article
Hello group 23, Thank you for writing your article in your sandbox! I have read the article and would like to give some feedback to improve your article to Wikipedia standards and customs. While your tutor will judge it content wise, I will look if it meets the quality standards we have on Wikipedia. I standard look for a series of subjects that need improvement or are okay. I hope you can implement this feedback to your sandbox article soon. Thanks! Romaine (talk) 01:35, 28 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Intro sentence: copied from original
 * Links: sufficient
 * Headers: Use less capitalised characters, usually we only make the first character of a header capitalised, unless it is a given name.
 * References: okay
 * Other: Why is not everything from the original article used? Many parts of the original article are missing. It is not considered okay to just overwrite an article and then delete many content.