Draft talk:Hassan Nisar Haripur

Request for review of Draft:Hassan Nisar Haripur
his is a request for review of the draft article Draft:Hassan Nisar, a Pakistani entrepreneur, YouTuber, and philanthropist.

The draft has been created with links to reputable sources that demonstrate notable achievements and awards. The content has been written with a neutral and verifiable tone.

Disclosure: The creator of this draft has a connection to the subject, having worked with them on their initiatives.

Please review the draft to ensure it meets Wikipedia's guidelines and standards. Thank you for your time and expertise. Uohabacasu (talk) 12:29, 17 June 2024 (UTC)

Source evaluation
This draft has been rejected but another source has been added, so I'll do a source evaluation here for the sources that are in the current version of the draft.

The sources are in four batches. The first one has citations that have been added to the draft in the correct manner to verify various bits of information.

Then there's a list of nine external links with no explanation of how they relate to the info in the draft.

The third batch is a refdump placed after the last of the external links above, for some reason. Again no info on how they relate to the draft.

And the final batch is again a linkdump placed after the previous one on the page.

I don't quite know what to say to anyone who believes that these sources do, in any shape or form whatsoever, meet WP:CORPDEPTH. --bonadea contributions talk 13:44, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
 * ...nor WP:BLP, which is the relevant one here. (Kind of drives my point home, that I didn't remember this was supposed to be about a person – so few of the sources do more than mention him by name!) --bonadea contributions talk 14:01, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Bonadea, You did a pretty good job. Majority of sources are WP:GUNREL. — Saqib  ( talk  I  contribs ) 16:14, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks for doing the legwork on this. With so many references, including in some major publications, but with the draft in such a poor state, it was difficult to see the wood from the trees. I'd started trying to group them, but gave up when they piled yet more references on. Good job. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 19:03, 18 June 2024 (UTC)