Draft talk:Holochain

3 ways the draft can be improved

 * 1) Expanding the introduction: The introduction should provide a concise summary of the entire article, touching on the most important points, such as the agent-centric approach, potential applications, and its environmental impact. Ensure that it gives readers a comprehensive overview of what to expect from the rest of the article.
 * 2) Adding more context: Where possible, add more context about Holochain, especially regarding the history and development of the project. This could include discussing the motivations behind creating Holochain, the timeline of its development, and any key milestones achieved along the way. A drawback here is it seems to be difficult to find independent sources for this information, so it is possible it cannot be included.
 * 3) Organizing content into sections: To improve the readability and structure of the article, consider organizing the content into appropriate sections with headings. For example, you could have sections like "Overview," "Technical Details," "Comparison with Blockchain," "Applications," and "Projects Using Holochain."

Brooksypoo (talk) 12:47, 23 April 2023 (UTC)