Draft talk:Hou Shur-Tzy

G2's comments and suggestions
First of all, we think you can start putting your references onto your article. Then, if you can find more sources, try to find more to support your description. Elainehsiehh (talk) 02:07, 22 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments form Group 1

 * 1) Your references are not enough.
 * 2) You don't include links. For example, Rochester Institute of Technology.
 * 3) The Public Affairs and Style and Influence section, you can add more contents. We think it seeems not enough.

PennyLin7 (talk) 02:11, 22 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments from Group 5
Overall, the structure is clear and organized. However, the format of Style and influence can be improved. The link of the sources are not provided in the article. Moreover, I think the content can be more diverse. Yuchun152412 (talk) 02:12, 22 May 2024 (UTC)

G4
No citation and references. Mini Huang (talk) 02:16, 22 May 2024 (UTC)

G3's Comments and Suggestions
We think the brackets should be deleted, and the reference of the link is missing. Kubiiigood (talk) 02:25, 22 May 2024 (UTC)