Draft talk:Indictments against Donald Trump

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Topic might be notable, but it reads like a news article. Lines like "Such an indictment, if given, could occur as soon as tomorrow" are not future proof and don't match the style expected in an an encyclopedia article. For things like "presently the most notable is" says who? Unless sources are discussing the various grand juries in that way, it's speculation that one is more relevant than another. Slywriter (talk) 02:26, 22 March 2023 (UTC)


 * Good point. Lots of edits to the text within the draft should be be made to address these things. Greshthegreat (talk) 02:50, 22 March 2023 (UTC)