Draft talk:Intracluster Medium

Review of Intracluster Medium Article
Based on what you currently have in your sandbox I would explain the density profile as soon as you begin discussing the density. You begin with "the density is not very high..." and then later go on to discuss its steeply rising central density, I would condense that all into one section. In fact I think the whole last paragraph of the Observing section would be better placed in the composition section. In the cooling flow section there is no follow up on the cooling flow problem. I don't know if there is more information to be had, but just a bit more in this section would go a long way in my opinion, but I realize the wiki article on cooling flows is short and you risk stepping on its toes. WhiskeyJack27 (talk) 19:19, 11 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I'm still working on cleaning up the organization of the article while I'm adding citations and clarifying it. Next on my list is to tackle the cooling flows section and you're right the wiki article on that is quite lacking. I think after this assignment is over I'll spend some time editing that article and matching it up with references and information in the ICM article. Drbingbing (talk) 01:01, 15 March 2017 (UTC)