Draft talk:Jafar Najafi

Request for advise
@Notcharizard

Dear Notcharizard

As I'm not English native please accept my apologies if I'm not fluent

Appreciate your kind comments, kindly please advise if I can remove some sentences from biography or make it short to make it more formal or it's needs to completely rewrites.

Appreciate your kind if you can help to improve and submit this page and introduce my countryman filmaker artist in wiki.

Please advise about the following revise:

Jafar Najafi (Persian/Farsi: جعفر نجفی) is an Iranian filmmaker born in 1987 in Kouhrang, Iran. His documentary films focus on child marriage and women’s rights.

Thank you

Raminsemsar (talk) 21:29, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

Ask for help
@GoingBatty hi, could you advise and help why they reject the draft.

Najafi have 3 documentary that two of them wins international awards, is it not enough for Wikipedia article for a director?

Raminsemsar (talk) 17:19, 17 November 2023 (UTC)


 * @Raminsemsar: Hi there! The editor who declined your draft added a template to the top of the draft that indicates that the references "do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject".  Per WP:THREE, what do you think are the three best independent sources you have provided that contain significant coverage of Najafi himself? GoingBatty (talk) 18:00, 17 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Actually as Najafi is Iranian director there is not much English reference about him but the first 3 footnotes maybe the best I can mension.
 * I try to add sources for everything I write in draft.
 * I appreciate your help, it's really meaning for me to introduce Najafi to English language people Raminsemsar (talk) 18:17, 17 November 2023 (UTC)
 * also there is more reference such as IMDb but other told me IMDb is not valid reference for wiki Raminsemsar (talk) 18:20, 17 November 2023 (UTC)