Draft talk:Jeff Szeryk

Promotional tone in the article
Hello! Your draft is written with an incredibly promotional tone. Wikipedia aims to maintain a neutral point of view on the subjects that we write about, especially about living (or recently deceased) people. You may also need some more reliable sources, with proper citations. Happy editing! Schrödinger's jellyfish &#9993; 06:52, 28 January 2024 (UTC)