Draft talk:Julie Kaplow

improvements
@Johannes Maximilian - I've been interested in helping people with draft articles that didn't make it through. I had some ideas. First, I moved a lot of the opening down to the career section. It's a good fit there. I summarize the article and then put that summary at the very top in the lede section. This is a good start for now. Cheers SilverhairedHarry (talk) 17:25, 5 April 2024 (UTC)