Draft talk:Maritime history of Africa

Please Help Me Refine My Article
I'm reaching out on experienced editors out there to have a look at my edited article and advise whether it meets the threshold and possibly have it published.

The reviewer who rejected it advised that it was not written in the "formal tone" expected and that I should avoid "peacock terms." I have since revised the whole article. It's currently pending review.

Thank you. Matandi2001 (talk) 17:41, 20 June 2024 (UTC)