Draft talk:Melowy

I have considerably improved the article this afternoon
After receiving the surprise notification this morning that this article had been moved to the draftspace, I've now done my utmost to address the stated main concern (Lack of independent references), by increasing the amount of references from 2 to 19, at least 10 of which (possibly more) I personally would consider independent, e.g. reviewer sites and bookstores. Thus I hope for a relatively quick approval, or at least quicker than the 4 months that the submission template claims it could take. Dandelion Sprout (talk) 17:39, 18 September 2022 (UTC)