Draft talk:Narrows Center for the Arts

Contested deletion
This page is not unambiguously promotional, because it's a cultural arts center. It's also referenced in several other Wikipedia entries including Fall River, Massachusetts, Fall River Heritage State Park. I am in no way affiliated with the Narrows Center, just a patron who loves that there is a local arts and music center and that the local region is trying to improve the arts and entertainment culture.

This is my first article, so any tips on making this page less apt to be considered "unambiguous advertising or promotion" would be appreciated. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Skatoulaki (talk • contribs) 02:27, 26 June 2014 (UTC)

First sentence
The article starts off badly: "The Narrows Center for the Arts is a 501(c)(3) organization founded in 1995 for the promotion and enjoyment of the visual and performing arts." The reader is unlikely to know, or care, what "501(c)(3)" means. It would be more helpful to start by saying that it's an art gallery, and that it's in Massachusetts (or wherever it is). Maproom (talk) 06:38, 1 July 2014 (UTC)