Draft talk:RyzallNoh

Seeking suggestions to improve my article page
This is the first time I created an article page. suggest me to improvements before I submit this for approval. RyzallNoh (talk) 08:46, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Firstly remove everything sourced to Wikipedia, Spotify, YouTube and music.apple, then remove everything that has no source, then re-write the rest in a dry neutral tone referring only to what independent sources say. Theroadislong (talk) 08:54, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Removed as suggested! working on re-writing this. RyzallNoh (talk) 12:26, 30 April 2024 (UTC)