Draft talk:The Good Samaritan Window, Chartres Cathedral

Hi this is good --Surferman155 (talk) 03:32, 10 February 2020 (UTC) First off, hold the phone.

It's okay to use BroTho's info, but you should rephrase it. "Images of the St. Martin windows at Chartres are provided by The Corpus of Medieval Narrative Art, an archive of high-resolution photographs of medieval narrative art, concentrating on French 13th-century stained glass. They are copyrighted by Dr Stuart Whiting and available for legitimate academic purpose." This does not belong in the article, it's basically a citation, not actual information about the window. The information under the heading "Chartres" is good but doesn't make sense with he heading. I would change the heading. Your description of the panes is good. Is there any way to make the list line up better? Also, what is 'The full St. Martin window which depicts scenes from his life. It is topped by Christ in Majesty" there for? Under 'Signature Panels: The Cobbler (Xavier)', the second sentence should be rewritten in active voice. The 'he' in the third sentence is ambiguous. Also remove your names from the headings. Life of St. Martin[9][10] 1,3,5,7,9,11-28,30- take the numbers out of the heading. Is this whole section just one big quote? If so, paraphrase it. Why are there citations in the heading? They should go after the information you cite. Your opening quotation mark is never closed. Don't forget to link to other articles- catechumen would be a good thing to link. "See" would as well. people don't usually know these words. The Death of St. MArtin section is repetitive and has the citations out of place again. Thurible is misspelled. There aren't spaces in your list of numbers and where it says 21, it should be 31. Make your sections consistent. The panel numbers should be in the paragraph, no the heading. the people are from Poitiers, they aren't Poiters themselves. Christ In Majesty should should be the same type of heading as the other like Cult and Death. Good pictures and layout.

i love you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by BaroqueHater (talk • contribs) 14:01, 9 March 2020 (UTC)