Draft talk:Theory of Hyper(in)visibility

Camila Espinosa Peer Review
Your page looks awesome and I will be taking some Inso to use on mine. I would just give advice on the lead when you start it. Make sure you add in details of the article body and stick to the concept’s/ ideas/ cultures you added In the body. This will create a good structure to start from and if anything towards the end of the project, you can go and add in other details that may arise will writing different sections! Camiladlaeespinosa (talk) 16:49, 11 November 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
Before you continue to add more information, it is best that you create sections so that the topics that the article covers could be more organized. Also, in references, the same article is cited multiple times. Remove the repeats. JAcosta2002 (talk) 19:21, 11 November 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review - Binta Bajo
Hello! Just wanted to let you all know that I posted the review on your page. BintaB (talk) 02:25, 12 November 2022 (UTC)