Draft talk:Thomas Hardy's Ale

DRAFT

 * User:Deb What do you think of the draft? Any suggestions?Rachelskit (talk) 16:10, 3 January 2021 (UTC)
 * You could improve it considerably by formatting the references as described here: Citing sources. Deb (talk) 16:29, 3 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Check out my updatesRachelskit (talk) 15:19, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Did you notice the error messages? (talk) 15:37, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Updated. Rachelskit (talk) 15:29, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Deb Check out my updatesRachelskit (talk) 15:19, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * That first link doesn't seem to lead anywhere. Deb (talk) 16:33, 9 January 2021 (UTC)