Draft talk:Tricho-Dento-Osseous Syndrome

Geri, I really liked your pictures and diagrams. They were very relevant and eye catching. Bravo on finding some winners. Are they cited properly though? I also thought you interpreted the scientific information very well. The technical terms were very clearly explained. This is an interesting article and I think it will be a great addition to wikipedia. I am not sure if you need all of those bolded abbreviations though, you might want to check with that.

Great job, Conor  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cheffer2 (talk • contribs) 22:10, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

Geri, Great intro! I think you have a typo here "The teeth can also appear normal in color, but be extremely thing and fragile in their appearance." I like how you have linked the buzz words to other articles. Great job at trying to break down the jargon into layman's terms; like the pictures as well. Typo here "Endodontic procedures are routinely recommended due to treatdental pulp exposure or periodontal abscess. " Overall a great read and easy to understand.

Good luck, April Hannafel2 (talk) 06:22, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

Hey girl!!

Ok it looks thorough, maybe you can have some subtitles under your main headers to separate the section. Because it seemed like a book kind of lol. Other than that good pictures and stuff, just make sure to look back at the rubric for the small details. Emccre2 (talk) 01:54, 7 April 2014 (UTC)

Geri, this is a spectacular page and the time you put into it really shows! I especially like the pictures you have provided for every user. Also, abstract is nicely done, and really does a great job of summarizing everything. There could probably be some more information on recent research, but I do know this is a rough draft so not all of the information has been presented. Under diagnosis, I see that you stated that your disease can be mistaken for Amelogenesis imperfecta, which is important to state. There was a typo after that word, should it be "of the"? Other than that, great jb and good luck moving forward!

Hyogina23 (talk) 04:02, 7 April 2014 (UTC) Harin Yogina

Sweiner02 (talk) 22:29, 8 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Good use of links to other wikipedia pages
 * Look at other wikipedia pages and use cite tool for proper references section
 * Introduction is very clear and approachable
 * Make sure to explain or avoid jargon in symptoms section
 * This is looking really great. Obviously you haven't really done the recent research section yet, but most of what you have done looks fairly thorough and well organized.