Draft talk:Violet McNaughton (activist)

Hi Alexisbums! Your article is really good! I thought it was very refined and well-written, especially for a first draft. The changes you made definitely strengthened the article and you added a lot of great information. I learned a ton :):)

Just a few minor things I noticed:

-I would spell out World War 1 instead of writing WW1, because later you spell out World War 2. (in The Western Producer section)

-I would also capitalize the word "Spanish" in Spanish flu (Activism section)

-I think you are missing the word "she" between "activism work" and "was recruited" in this sentence: "Given McNaughton's reputation through her activism work, was recruited initially as part time endeavor which quickly became her full time occupation with its success by 1926." (Mainly for women section)

-My only other question was where you got the information for this sentence: "Although never biologically or legally having children, McNaughton is known to have been a mothering figure for approximately five young people from the 1920s to 1930s. She died in 1968 in Saskatoon, Saskatchewan at the age of 88" Maybe add a citation here?

I had to be very nitpicky to point out those small details, and I'm sure you would have noticed them yourself. Overall, I think your article is very strong!