File talk:Praxisinter.jpg

Correction suggestion
Hi, Magnus Manske:

It was a good idea to create this illustration. However, there are a few things to clean up.

1. The central example of people needing help is grammatically off in English. Perhaps it could be changed to something like:


 * Persons who can be helped to care for themselves.

-OR-


 * Persons who need a degree of support.

...that kind of thing.

2. Either spell "Praxis Intervention" out in all labels or give it as an acronym in all labels. (However, spelling it out will remove any confusion in the mind of the casual reader practising praxis. ^_^ )

3. In the left-hand illustration, change the unnecessary capital letters to lower case.

4. Perhaps a Venn Diagram would simplify both the illustration and your work in editing it? Can you re-create the illustration in SVG instead of JPEG as the request on the illustration's page suggest? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Praxisinter.jpg

Thank you for your time, Wordreader (talk) 20:38, 17 September 2011 (UTC)