Portal talk:Pakistan/Introduction

Precision
The logic that a "role in the birth of civilization..." connects to its prominence in current world events seems weak. I have adjusted accordingly. FeatherPluma (talk) 00:43, 21 November 2011 (UTC) It similarly seems non-specific to say that "Geographically, present day (sic) Pakistan has... long been (sic)... etc. Is the idea of the sentence that the AREA of present-day Pakistan is being alluded to, or is the sentence referring to "present-day" Pakistan, now that it has been longstanding (over 60 years and then some...?) Removed as 1. uncited 2. WP:OR and most crucially as 3. non-specific in meaning. FeatherPluma (talk) 16:50, 10 January 2012 (UTC)