Talk:(You Drive Me) Crazy Tour/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Arre 9 (talk · contribs) 06:39, 17 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Background and development
 * "...premiere of the music video of..." → "premiere of the music video for"
 * Also, no mistake here, but which Snow White does the mirror resemble? a book? a movie?
 * "Spears was also joined on stage by eight dancers. She had five costumes changes during the show." → "During the show, Spears was joined on stage by eight dancers, and had five costume changes." ('Also' mentioned twice in neighbor sentences)
 * Concert synopsis
 * "The show with a skit in which the dancers came out of lockers and stayed in the stage until a bell rang" → should it be "the show opened with a skit"?
 * Broadcasting and recordings
 * "...it was broadcast in a special in Fox. The special was aired several times during the year" → "it was broadcast as a special on Fox, which was aired several other times during the year." ('special' over-mentioned)

Overall, apart from this tiny wording issues, the article is really great. I'll just wait till you make this minor adjustments until I pass it. Great work! Ar re  06:39, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
 * All done! Thanks for the review! — Statυs  ( talk,  contribs ) 06:46, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Okay. Passed :) Ar  re  06:49, 17 March 2013 (UTC)