Talk:Écoute (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs) 06:42, 29 September 2016 (UTC)

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Lead section

 * Removed "recorded" or change "recording artist" to "singer"; repetition of the word "record".
 * "Écoute" portrays a dance song which incorporates tropical beats and oriental elements in its instrumentation; according to Stan, its lyrics delve on "pure love, without barriers, which does not limit you." — "Ecoute" is a dance song, which incorporates musical elements of tropical beats and oriental sounds in its instrumentation. According to Stan, the songwriting is based on the theme of limitless and unconditional love."
 * "eventually" — unnecessary; remove it.

Composition

 * "it portrays a dance song which incorporates tropical beats, oriental elements and violins in its instrumentation." — same as the lead.
 * The rest is good!

Reception

 * "Upon its release, "Écoute" was acclaimed by music critic Olivio Umberto" — If you are trying to say that the track received acclaimed reviews from music critics in generally, you don't need to identify that it was so by a critic. Just say "Upon its release, "Ecoute" was acclaimed by music critics."
 * ❌ Sorry, but there's only one review, so in this case it is OK. Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:54, 29 September 2016 (UTC)


 * Also, there is only one defined review on the reception section. Is there any more reviews? Can be quite small comments by established magazines, websites, etc.
 * ❌ Sorry, the coverage of this song was very limited on the internet, as you can see throughout the whole article. Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:54, 29 September 2016 (UTC)


 * Change "native" to "the Romanian"

Credits and personnel

 * Any additional notes about where it was recorded, the songwriting, etc.?

Release history

 * Use an format for the inclusions in the "labels" column.

Overall GA conclusion
A really good article! On hold for 7 days for additional editing. Please ping me for any inquires or when you have finished! Good luck. CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk &middot;&#32;contribs} 06:53, 29 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Everything done apart from the requested expansion of the credits and personnel. Thank you SO much and best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:59, 29 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Passing! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk &middot;&#32;contribs} 04:07, 30 September 2016 (UTC)