Talk:145th Street station (IRT Lenox Avenue Line)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 08:31, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments That's it for a first pass. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:18, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Things in the infobox either not mentioned elsewhere and/or not referenced:
 * Zip code.
 * Bx19
 * Short line bus 208
 * Ridership rank.
 * Will fix these. epicgenius (talk) 00:31, 11 April 2020 (UTC) ✅. I have hidden the ZIP Code because there are three of them, and short line bus because it's not operating. epicgenius (talk) 14:44, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Decrease 41.9% from when? The previous year?
 * Yes. Should I add this to the infobox? epicgenius (talk) 00:31, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Or in the main prose where it ought to be mentioned perhaps? The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 10:45, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ Technically, this is only because of the station closure that the station suffered a large decrease in ridership. epicgenius (talk) 14:44, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Lead feels a little brief for an article of this size.
 * ✅ Expanded a little.
 * Still looks a little odd with such a short opening paragraph... The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 10:45, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * more. epicgenius (talk) 14:44, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "With ... within" "planned ... plans", a little repetitive.
 * "take shuttle buses, the M7 or the M102." potentially confusing, what about "take the M7 or the M102 shuttle buses."?
 * These are three routes. So I reordered these. epicgenius (talk) 00:31, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "This was done to correct " don't need "done".
 * Explain what MTA is before using the abbreviation.
 * Likewise NYCT.
 * Station layout - side platform is overlinked, Entrance/Exit is just Entrance/exit, Street Level is just Street level.
 * "9 cars to 10 cars " nine to ten cars.
 * "The artwork consists o" -> "It consists.."
 * " 142nd Street Junction" and "IRT White Plains Road Line" are overlinked.
 * Note A appears unreferenced.
 * as it is trivia. epicgenius (talk) 00:31, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Spaced hyphens should be en-dashes.
 * Avoid SHOUTING in the ref titles (e.g. ref 6)
 * Ref 26 has no publisher/website info. Check others.
 * "mta.info. Metropolitan Transportation Authority", this is used several times, "Metropolitan Transportation Authority" is linked once, on the last occasion. Check your linking methodology in the references in toto.
 * Hopefully fixed. epicgenius (talk) 00:31, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Note A appears unreferenced.
 * as it is trivia. epicgenius (talk) 00:31, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Spaced hyphens should be en-dashes.
 * Avoid SHOUTING in the ref titles (e.g. ref 6)
 * Ref 26 has no publisher/website info. Check others.
 * "mta.info. Metropolitan Transportation Authority", this is used several times, "Metropolitan Transportation Authority" is linked once, on the last occasion. Check your linking methodology in the references in toto.
 * Hopefully fixed. epicgenius (talk) 00:31, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Ref 26 has no publisher/website info. Check others.
 * "mta.info. Metropolitan Transportation Authority", this is used several times, "Metropolitan Transportation Authority" is linked once, on the last occasion. Check your linking methodology in the references in toto.
 * Hopefully fixed. epicgenius (talk) 00:31, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks. These have been addressed, except for the infobox stuff, which I'll get to later, since it's quite late for me right now. epicgenius (talk) 00:31, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * No worries, a couple of responses above, ping me when you're done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 10:45, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I have done these. epicgenius (talk) 14:44, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * All good, promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 08:45, 12 April 2020 (UTC)