Talk:14 Wall Street/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:30, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose ✅

2. Verifiability ✅

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous ✅

Comments
1.
 * Would it be appropriate to link Venice? Venice is fairly well known, but some readers may not know where Venice is.
 * Is there a way to gloss what a tempietto is? It's not a well-known architectural feature, and typing the phrase in the searchbar redirects to a specific example.
 * Link granite
 * "the street than did the original building,[4] In addition to an entrance" - I believe that should be a period, not a comma.
 * "The "express" elevators that ran nonstop from the lobby to serve the upper floors while the "local" elevators served the lower floors and the "relief" elevators served all floors." - Remove the word "that"
 * J. P. Morgan is a duplink
 * "the trust leased the Stevens Building for 84 years. at a cost of $1.5 million." - the period after years shouldn't be there
 * "The "express" elevators that ran nonstop from the lobby to serve the upper floors while the "local" elevators served the lower floors and the "relief" elevators served all floors." - Remove the word "that"
 * J. P. Morgan is a duplink
 * "the trust leased the Stevens Building for 84 years. at a cost of $1.5 million." - the period after years shouldn't be there
 * J. P. Morgan is a duplink
 * "the trust leased the Stevens Building for 84 years. at a cost of $1.5 million." - the period after years shouldn't be there
 * "the trust leased the Stevens Building for 84 years. at a cost of $1.5 million." - the period after years shouldn't be there

2.
 * Publication date for the MTA map (Ref 6) should be 2015 I believe - that's the date on the map.
 * Some issues with Ref 90 (The NY Post archive) - First, there should be a $ in the title instead of the %. Second, the archive linked to has some markup code instead of the article below the NY Post header (the page appears to have been down during the web crawl), but the archive snapshot before the current one does work (use the arrows at the top by the dates)
 * ✅ I also found the current page location, so it is a live link now. epicgenius (talk) 13:46, 11 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Ref 101 needs the publication date.
 * Ref 101 needs the publication date.

3.

4.

5.

6.

7.
 * Should the note about the floors be noted in the infobox too, since it's placed in the lead and the first mention in the text, or would that cross the line into clutter in your view?
 * No, I think this would be fine. epicgenius (talk) 13:46, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

Placing on hold, just a few things to tidy up. Hog Farm (talk) 04:09, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

Good work. Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 15:27, 11 May 2020 (UTC)