Talk:15th Anti-Aircraft Brigade (United Kingdom)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:03, 18 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:48, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "1941—7 March" needs to be spaced en-dash.
 * "January 1947–31 December" likewise.
 * "Anti-Aircraft command" why capital A in Aircraft?
 * "those AA units based" I would say "those anti-aircraft (AA) units based...."
 * Is there a link for "batteries".
 * "Bofors 40 mm guns" link?
 * "train the AA Section" why capital S for Section?
 * Phoney War seems to capitalise War.
 * What's HAA?
 * "slopes of the Rock, causing" link Rock?
 * "coming North African Campaign, the" campaign not capitalised.
 * " on the rock" capital R? Consistency, at least.
 * "20mm Oerlikon" link?
 * "20 HAA gus" typo?
 * "at 240 mph" convert.
 * "wrote to the War Office asking" overlinked.
 * "and Bofors 40 mm guns together" overlinked.
 * "was War Office policy" overlinked.
 * "Decrease in Hostilities" hostilities.
 * Link Medway.
 * "rise of Surface-to-air missiles and 'blind fire' radar control" no need to capitalise Surface. What is "blind fire radar control"?
 * "placed in suspended animation" why not just "suspended" rather than this verbose detail?
 * Ref 18 should be spaced en-dash.
 * And ref 20.
 * Ref 22 should be pp.
 * "forces 1660-1978 : biographical" en-dash.


 * Changes added and fixed J-Man11 (talk) 18:52, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

All completed J-Man11 (talk) 12:55, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "1941—7 March" needs to be spaced en-dash.
 * "January 1947–31 December" likewise.
 * "Anti-Aircraft command" why capital A in Aircraft?
 * "those AA units based" I would say "those anti-aircraft (AA) units based...."
 * Is there a link for "batteries".
 * "Bofors 40 mm guns" link?
 * "train the AA Section" why capital S for Section?
 * Phoney War seems to capitalise War.
 * What's HAA?
 * "slopes of the Rock, causing" link Rock?
 * "coming North African Campaign, the" campaign not capitalised.
 * " on the rock" capital R? Consistency, at least.
 * "20mm Oerlikon" link?
 * "20 HAA gus" typo?
 * "at 240 mph" convert.
 * "wrote to the War Office asking" overlinked.
 * "and Bofors 40 mm guns together" overlinked.
 * "was War Office policy" overlinked.
 * "Decrease in Hostilities" hostilities.
 * Link Medway.
 * "rise of Surface-to-air missiles and 'blind fire' radar control" no need to capitalise Surface. What is "blind fire radar control"?
 * "placed in suspended animation" why not just "suspended" rather than this verbose detail?
 * Ref 18 should be spaced en-dash.
 * And ref 20.
 * Ref 22 should be pp.
 * "forces 1660-1978 : biographical" en-dash.