Talk:165 West 57th Street/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * Short description goes at the top.
 * Move "Use mdy dates" below the hatnote.
 * Add alt text to every image being used.
 * Remove the space between "second- and".
 * Add "the" before "United States" (both times).
 * Don't use colons for the sentence starting with "in addition".
 * "in a different manner" "differently" (less wordy)
 * "cornice is a" "cornice are a"
 * "moved out the building" "moved out of the building"
 * "at the ground story" "on the ground story"
 * "five disabled students taking class" "five disabled students taking classes"
 * "tiles and new signage was added" "tiles and new signage were added"
 * "in a manner similar to" - kinda wordy.
 * Wikilink The New York Times and Raymond Ericson.

Progress

 * Thanks. I have fixed all of these now. Epicgenius (talk) 01:27, 8 July 2021 (UTC)