Talk:1799 St. Mary's Church riot

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In the Background category, the last sentence of the first paragraph. You state "These acts declared that" I think this sentence could use a comma at the end.

Additionally, in the Events section. You state that church goers are affected by the acts. Are you saying that the church was in a way the safest place for them? And being in this safe place, could you rather say this lead to the posting of the petition instead of saying "They also"? Andrew Douthat (talk) 04:39, 28 February 2024 (UTC)


 * Your summary at the top should include a brief explanation of what happened during the riots. The section that Drew signals looks incomplete, consider expanding your explanation.Dor13ian (talk) 23:01, 1 March 2024 (UTC)