Talk:1916 Pensacola hurricane/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 19:44, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

Pretty good article you crafted there. It just needs a few minor fixes. Noah Talk 19:44, 31 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "(as a tropical system)" I dont think that is needed since you clearly state the other system was another storm
 * Add note 1 to the damage in lead and the first mention in the body
 * "The hurricane maitnained" typo there
 * "last observed continuing in this direction" I don't think this part is needed.
 * "topping records set in three months prior in the 1916 Gulf Coast hurricane" missing some word(s)
 * "All wires in Pensacola" what kind of wires?
 * Thanks for the prompt review! These were all sensible qualms, so I've made the changes accordingly. As for note 1, I think that its first appearance in the article is sufficient since it does make the assertion that all monetary values in the article, regardless of position, are in 1916 USD. — TheAustinMan (Talk ⬩ Edits) 02:35, 1 April 2020 (UTC)