Talk:1920 Cleveland Tigers (NFL) season/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 21:19, 5 January 2013 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * See comment section.
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * See comment section.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * On hold just for so the last comment can be addressed.--Dom497 (talk) 21:34, 11 January 2013 (UTC) Pass!--Dom497 (talk) 00:21, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * See comment section.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * On hold just for so the last comment can be addressed.--Dom497 (talk) 21:34, 11 January 2013 (UTC) Pass!--Dom497 (talk) 00:21, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Pass or Fail:
 * On hold just for so the last comment can be addressed.--Dom497 (talk) 21:34, 11 January 2013 (UTC) Pass!--Dom497 (talk) 00:21, 12 January 2013 (UTC)

Comments
—Michael Jester (talk &#183; contribs) 23:23, 5 January 2013 (UTC) —Michael Jester (talk &#183; contribs) 01:57, 7 January 2013 (UTC) —Michael Jester (talk &#183; contribs) 23:23, 5 January 2013 (UTC) —Michael Jester (talk &#183; contribs) 23:23, 5 January 2013 (UTC) —Michael Jester (talk &#183; contribs) 01:57, 7 January 2013 (UTC) —Michael Jester (talk &#183; contribs) 02:30, 7 January 2013 (UTC) —Michael Jester (talk &#183; contribs) 02:30, 7 January 2013 (UTC) —Michael Jester (talk &#183; contribs) 02:30, 7 January 2013 (UTC) —Michael Jester (talk &#183; contribs) 22:28, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Access dates are missing on several of the references/notes.--Dom497 (talk) 21:25, 5 January 2013 (UTC)
 * I have added access dates.
 * The book refs in the Note section don't have access dates.--Dom497 (talk) 00:07, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Which ones? If you're talking about (for example) "PFRA Research 1980, pp. 3–4", I'm using the template harvnb, which doesn't have an accessdate parameter.
 * Ok, its fine then.--Dom497 (talk) 21:33, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
 * In the roster section, readers looking at an article like this for the first time will likely not know what LOE-DE, ROE-DE, etc, mean. Spell out the full position and you can put the short form in brackets if you wish.--Dom497 (talk) 21:25, 5 January 2013 (UTC)
 * I have added a table instead. Will this suffice?
 * Yup, thats fine!--Dom497 (talk) 00:07, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Though the image section of the review is a pass, try to find an image of the team or something. I know its 1920 so it may be pretty hard but just give it a shot.--Dom497 (talk) 21:27, 5 January 2013 (UTC)
 * I found a picture of the stadium. Google Images did not provide much.
 * Good enough.--Dom497 (talk) 00:07, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Week 3 has no refs.--Dom497 (talk) 00:08, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Added refs.
 * Standings section has no refs.--Dom497 (talk) 00:08, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Added a reference.
 * "They then invited other professional teams to a second meeting on September 17." Source?--Dom497 (talk) 00:16, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Added source.
 * "At that meeting...", The first or second?--Dom497 (talk) 00:16, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
 * The second. Fixed.
 * Any refs that show that there were no games for the team for weeks 1,2,11,12,13?--Dom497 (talk) 21:31, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Yeah, there's a reference at the top of the table (NFL History 2003, pp. 1–7). That shows all the games for the entire 1920 season for all teams.
 * Whoops, didn't see that!--Dom497 (talk) 00:21, 12 January 2013 (UTC)