Talk:1921 Vanderbilt Commodores football team/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 20:14, 20 April 2016 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAG UAR   20:14, 20 April 2016 (UTC)

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Checking against the GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * " Putty captained its 1917 team and Rupe the 1919 squad." - needs a citation
 * " Red Williams fumbled on the next play, but it was recovered by Alf Sharpe in the end zone." - this too needs a citation
 * The second paragraph of the Week 3: at Kentucky section is largely unsourced
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * No original research found.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

I could find no issues with the prose, although I spotted some minor issues with citations not being located at the end of paragraphs, but nothing major enough to delay this. Overall it's well written and comprehensive. JAG UAR   10:35, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you Jaguar. The Kentucky section's second and third paragraphs are from the last two sources tagged on at the end. I tried to sprinkle those throughout. Also added sources to the two other neglected claims. Cake (talk) 13:57, 21 April 2016 (UTC)