Talk:1924 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Merge the timeline with the storms section? YE Pacific  Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Sure--12george1 (talk) 03:20, 25 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Why no ACE? YE Pacific  Hurricane
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:20, 25 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "Heavy rainfall was reported in Mexico.[1]" why is "rainfall" linked? Did you forget the MOS? :P YE Pacific  Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
 * I think there is people dumb enough to not know what rainfall is. :P JK, I just forgot to delink it.--12george1 (talk) 03:20, 25 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "The storm tracked northeastward," to "The storm tracked northeast,". YE Pacific  Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:20, 25 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "The cyclone strengthened to a peak intensity of 135 mph (215 km/h) north of Grand Bahama on August 24." why does the infobox say 100 knots then? YE Pacific  Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:20, 25 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "Damage was minimal" you just said there was no damage! YE Pacific  Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Technically, there couldn't have been no damage. Even if next to nothing, there would have at least some damage because the storm flooded Ocracoke Island.--12george1 (talk) 03:20, 25 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "Most of Brownton, Georgia was destroyed by floods.[8]" get rid of the redlink. YE Pacific  Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:20, 25 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "Ship observations were sparse in tracking the storm. It was last observed on September 22.[2]" combine these two sentences. YE Pacific  Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:20, 25 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "Early on October 12, the sixth tropical cyclone of the season developed in the eastern Gulf of Mexico " delink GOM as you link it in previous section. YE Pacific  Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:20, 25 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "It quickly weakened and made landfall Southwest Florida near Naples, Florida as a Category 1 hurricane.[11] " "Landfall Southwest"? forgot a word? :P YE Pacific  Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Guess I don't practice what I preach? :P --12george1 (talk) 03:20, 25 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "t quickly became extratropical and was last reported on November 15.[2][1]" keep refs in order. YE Pacific  Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:20, 25 August 2013 (UTC)