Talk:1925 Florida tropical storm/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk) 22:55, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Lede
 * "...the storm further strengthened into a hurricane before striking central Florida on December 1." - Wikilink "Florida"
 * Done Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
 * "On December 5, the system is believed to have dissipated offshore." - Sounds like a personally opinion, like someone said "I believe that the system dissipated on December 5". You should probably revise to something like this: "On December 5, the system was presumed to have dissipated offshore."
 * Done Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
 * "Property damage amounted to $3 million, $1 million of which was in Jacksonville." - Add inflation templates to $3 million and $1 million
 * Done Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Meteorological history
 * "The 1925 Florida hurricane was first identified on November 27, 1925 as a tropical depression situated to the southeast of the Yucatán Peninsula, nearly a month after the official end of the hurricane season." - First, erase "1925", since it would be obvious that this system formed in 1925. On the second part of this sentence, I don't think that a hurricane season in 1925 was June 1 - November 30, and BTW, November 27 is actually three days before the official end of hurricane season, and not "nearly a month" later. \
 * The 1925 has to be there as a formality (MOS) and at the time, hurricane season ended in October, not November :) Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
 * In the first paragraph, delink "Cuba" and "landfall", since they are already linked in the lede.
 * Links go by section rather than the entire article from what I've gathered. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Impact
 * "...only 0.22 in (5.58 mm) of rain fell in the city." - Wikilink inches and millimetres
 * Done Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Add inflation templates to the following money values under the first paragraph of United States: $200,000, $3 million, $1 million, $600,000, and $250,000.
 * Done Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
 * In that same paragraph, delink "Jacksonville"
 * No reason to (reason in earlier response) Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
 * "A ship named the American SS Catopazi sank between Charleston, South Carolina and the northern coast of Cuba, with all 30 crew members lost." - Do you mean sank while sailing between Charleston, South Carolina and the northern coast of Cuba, because it sounds like it could have sank over Florida.
 * Unless you're thinking the ship was sailing over land, it's assumed to be over water. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
 * In the last paragraph, delink "Cape Hatteras"
 * No reason to delink it Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
 * References
 * On reference #2, the date is incorrect, it reads 1993, but it should say January 21, 2010.
 * It was changed after a wrote the article and implemented that reference. Updated it though. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
 * On reference #6, the accessdate reads "January 2, 1925", do you mean ''January 2, 2011?
 * Whoops, fixed it. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Most references that are written by Associated Press say "The Associated Press", which is not the correct name.
 * Good catch, thanks. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:20, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Summary
 * Good job, you have either addressed or fix my issues, so therefore, I am passing this article for GA. Congratulations,--12george1 (talk) 22:31, 12 March 2011 (UTC)