Talk:1926–27 Cardiff City F.C. season/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: REDMAN 2019 (talk · contribs) 10:48, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this shortly. REDMAN 2019 ( talk ) 10:48, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

Lead

 * Link England
 * Linking countries is normally discouraged, per WP:OVERLINK. Kosack (talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

Background

 * England link needed here as well
 * Same as above. Kosack (talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "Joe Cassidy from Bolton Wanderers, George McLachlan from Clyde and Hughie Ferguson from Motherwell." Reference
 * The ref covering this is number 7, the one immediately following on. It covers both sentences. Kosack (talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

August-December

 * Ferguson is already linked in the previous section, no need to link him again
 * Dropped. Kosack (talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Link Bury in the third paragraph
 * Linked. Kosack (talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

January-May

 * "Ferguson rediscovered his goalscoring form after being switched and added a brace in a 2–0 win over Derby the following week in front of 10,057 spectators, the lowest league crowd of the season at Ninian Park." This sentence needs a ref
 * As above, the ref immediately preceding the information covers this section (ref 14 in this case).
 * Unlink Bury. They should be linked in the section above, not here.
 * Done. Kosack (talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Link Liverpool
 * Done. Kosack (talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

Match results

 * Who scored the own-goals against Tottenham?
 * The ref I have only lists the scorer as an own goal, not the actual player unfortunately. Kosack (talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

FA Cup

 * Link Bolton to Bolton Wanderers
 * Bolton are linked in the background section previously. Kosack (talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "as Cardiff were aggrieved early on after being denied a penalty." Link Penalty to Penalty kick (association football)
 * Done. Kosack (talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "Lewis later blamed the error on his jersey, claiming that due to it being new, the material was greasy and made it difficult to grip the ball." Ref needed
 * As above, the ref immediately preceding the information covers this section (refs 49 and 50 in this case). Kosack (talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

Aftermath

 * "Cardiff showed a major improvement in their league form the following year, finishing sixth in the First Division." Ref needed
 * As above, the ref immediately preceding the information covers this section (ref 60 in this case). Kosack (talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

Comments
There are a few issues that need addressing so I'm putting this on hold for now. REDMAN 2019 ( talk ) 11:31, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking a look, I've addressed all of the points above. Kosack (talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the feedback, I would say this article now meets GA criteria so I'm passing it. Congrats! REDMAN 2019  ( talk ) 10:51, 28 October 2020 (UTC)