Talk:1929 World Snooker Championship/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:13, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Shall review MWright96 (talk) 08:13, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * The sole mention of the term frame can be wikilinked to the relevant article
 * Linked: "19 to 14 in the final." BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 16:28, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Background

 * "the BACC decided to abandon the challenge system that had been used for both the Billiards Championship and for the Professional Snooker Championship." - employed for both the Billiards Championship and the Professional Snooker Championship.
 * Wikilink the term frame to the relevant article only on the first mention
 * "For matches before the final," - how about For pre-final matches, instead?
 * All done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 16:38, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Summary

 * "Lawrence and Mann had to play a first round match, the winner to meet Davis." - with the winner
 * Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 16:47, 14 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "over six days than the three envisaged when the tournament's conditions were announced." - why was this the case?
 * Amended. The source has a note "(evening sessions only being played, so that the game occupied six days instead of three)" but no reason as to why the change was made. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 16:47, 14 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Wikilink the term session to the relevant article only on the first mention
 * Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 16:47, 14 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Wikilink the term potting to the articles for its first mention
 * Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 16:47, 14 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "Mann when attempting to pot the yellow instead of playing for a snoooker in the deciding frame lost him the match." - the word in bold contains a spelling error
 * Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 16:47, 14 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "maintaining a four-frame advantage at 9–7 after two days." - shouldn't that be two-frame
 * Yes. Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 16:47, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Final

 * "The final was played from 4 March to 7 March and was over 33 frames." - The 33-frame final was played from 4 to 7 March.
 * The term frame can be wikilinked to the relevant article only on the first mention
 * Wikilink foul stroke to the relevant article for non-Snooker readers
 * "Dennis won the 15th frame by six points, after clearing the last three colours, and added the 16th frame, during which he escaped from a snooker with a massé shot, and potted the pink after Davis had gone in-off." - run-on sentence
 * "Davis lost the first frame by one point, 56-57," - hyphen should be replaced by an en dash per MOS:DASH
 * "and the over break of over 50 made during the tournament." - repetition of "over"
 * All addressed. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 16:35, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Schedule

 * A table header will need to be added to the table which needs to be fully referenced
 * Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 17:10, 14 June 2021 (UTC)