Talk:1931 British Honduras hurricane/GA1

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 02:26, 15 November 2016 (UTC)


 * The infobox has Month-Day date format, but the rest of the article uses Day-Month. Can you change it so it's the same?
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:15, 15 November 2016 (UTC)


 * "The 1931 Belize hurricane was the deadliest hurricane in the history of Belize, killing 2,500 people." - this could be stronger and more attention grabbing. In September 1931, a hurricane struck Belize and killed an estimated 2,500 people, the deadliest on record in the country. Only, Belize wasn't a country until 1982, so I'm not sure about the best wording.
 * What can I do?--12george1 (talk) 03:15, 15 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Go with my wording (which I changed slightly), if that's OK. I found another source backing it up - - even if that might not be the most reliable to cite. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk )  18:39, 15 November 2016 (UTC)


 * "by which time it began to rapidly intensify. The tropical cyclone quickly attained Category 4 hurricane intensity." - could you merge these?
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:15, 15 November 2016 (UTC)


 * "Moving across the Yucatán Peninsula, the tropical cyclone weakened, and continued to weaken when it moved across the Bay of Campeche. " - can you remove the double "weaken"s
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:15, 15 November 2016 (UTC)


 * "and approximately 2,500 fatalities in British Honduras." - already mentioned in the lead
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:15, 15 November 2016 (UTC)


 * "In this region the system became sufficiently organised to be classified as a tropical depression at 18:00 UTC that same day
 * What am I supposed to do here?--12george1 (talk) 03:15, 15 November 2016 (UTC)
 * No idea, ignore it :P ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 18:39, 15 November 2016 (UTC)


 * "As the storm remained north-north-westbound across the Caribbean" - it never went NNW though
 * WNW--12george1 (talk) 03:15, 15 November 2016 (UTC)


 * "At 18:00 UTC on 8 September, the tropical storm attained hurricane intensity." - that's an estimate though
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:03, 15 December 2016 (UTC)


 * "The storm strengthened further before reaching its peak intensity with as a Category 4 hurricane with maximum sustained winds of 135 mph (215 km/h) at 1800 UTC." - weird wording
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:03, 15 December 2016 (UTC)


 * "The entire city was inundated with 5 ft (1.5 m)." - seems unfinished
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 05:03, 15 December 2016 (UTC)

Pretty good overall. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 02:26, 15 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I actually forgot about this :P --12george1 (talk) 05:03, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Any update on this? I don't think this should be failed, given GC's effort a month after you left this by the wayside. YE Pacific Hurricane  08:13, 30 December 2016 (UTC)