Talk:1932 Freeport hurricane/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 02:33, 14 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Per IRC, will do. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:33, 14 October 2012 (UTC)


 * You link SSHS twice in the lead. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
 * - Corrected, second one just says "Category 4 hurricane."  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)


 * "The precursor to the hurricane was first noted on August 12 as a tropical disturbance by several ships in the Gulf of Mexico.[1] " sounds weird I suggest changing that to "The Freeport hurricane was first noted by ships on August 12 as a tropical disturbances in the Gulf of Mexico.". YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
 * - Reworded.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)


 * "hurricane scale" should be capitalized. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
 * - Capitalized.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)


 * "Preparations and impact" should be re-titled to "Preparations, impact, and aftermath". YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
 * - Added, changed header.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)


 * "Communication lines in San Antonio were also damaged due to the storm.[4]" suggest re-writing it to "In addition, communication lines in San Antonio were damaged". YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
 * - Reworded.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)


 * "An estimated $2 million in damages from the storm were attributed to crop damage alone, especially rice and cotton.[11] The storm was estimated to have killed 40 people and caused $7.5 million in damage.[5]" year? YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * - Added a supplementary note.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Add the 1941 and 1949 Texas hurricane's to the see also. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
 * - Added.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

Otherwise, it is good. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  02:43, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
 * - Done with all your comments. Thanks for the notes.  TheAustinMan (Talk·Works) 02:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)