Talk:1933 Texas tropical storm/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 14:37, 13 July 2012 (UTC)

Otherwise, it's good. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "It was the third storm of the season, developing on July 14 near the Lesser Antilles. It moved westward through the Caribbean Sea, passing just south of Jamaica on July 16. The storm dropped heavy rainfall on the island that caused flooding and road washouts" You say "it" twice, you should avoid. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "Several stations reported record rainfall, including Shreveport, Louisiana where its 24 hour amount remained the highest daily total as of 2008." why as of 2008 and not as of 2012? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "of about 45 mph (72 km/h)." why isn't this unit round? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "On July 24, the cyclone began interacting with a cold front, and became extratropical.[1]" delink "extratropical" as you linked it that earlier in the article. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "As of 2009, this was the seventh highest total on record in the state, although three of the amounts were from the same storm. Logansport also reported a 24 hour total of 18 in (460 mm), which set the record for the highest daily rainfall total there in July.[8]" why as of 2009 and not as of 2012? YE  Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
 * List of Texas hurricanes applies for storms 1980- and this storm occurred earlier than 1980, List of Texas hurricanes (1900–1943) would be more appropriate here IMO. YE   Pacific   Hurricane  14:37, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
 * All addressed. Passing. YE  Pacific   Hurricane