Talk:1934 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 21:16, 1 April 2020 (UTC)

Will do this one tonight. Noah Talk 21:16, 1 April 2020 (UTC)


 * The Central America storm is linked twice in the lead
 * You should add a note stating that all monetary values are in 1934 unless otherwise stated and tack it to the first mention of money in the lead.
 * "wrought catastrophic rainfall that caused an enormous loss of life" I feel this would be better worded as "resulting in"
 * Link US and Texas
 * "a hurricane struck Texas and killed 19 people as a result of tornadoes and storm surge" --> a hurricane struck Texas, spawning tornadoes and generating storm surge, killing 19 people
 * Minimal death count is off by 10
 * "but maintaining status as an extratropical cyclone until late on June 21." this seems to be missing a word. I would also say where it dissipated as well.
 * Abbreviate inches
 * "After crossing Florida into the Gulf of Mexico" Something just doesn't resonate well with this... --> "After crossing over Florida and into the Gulf of Mexico" ?
 * "occurred in communities through central Texas" Throughout
 * "It failed to intensify over the next few days and instead degenerated to a tropical wave" This should be reworded since it could have already been a TW when it arrived there.
 * Abbreviate miles
 * "Several streams overflowed." Could this somehow be incorporated into the previous sentence?
 * Link trough
 * "Two buildings were electrically charged for unknown reasons during the storm" Did this injure anyone or cause damage?

That should be it. Noah Talk 02:55, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I think I've addressed your concerns. I removed the bit about TS Four possibly being a tropical wave as it moved through the islands since, officially, it's recognized as a tropical storm. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 19:32, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I corrected a few minor items that were missed. Is good to go now. Noah Talk 19:48, 2 April 2020 (UTC)