Talk:1934 World Snooker Championship/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:01, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Am going to review for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 17:01, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Background

 * "persuaded the Billiards Association and Control Council" - the acronym of the BACC needs to be put in brackets and placed after the full name
 * "Davis also won the title in 1928, 1929, 1930, 1931, 1932 and 1933." - how about Davis went on to win the title every year since 1928 instead?
 * "it was announced that preliminary heats and the semi-finals" - the preliminary heats and semi-finals
 * "(equivalent to £375 in 2019)" - equivalent to how much in 2021?
 * "a five-guineas sidestake" - the hyphen in bold is not needed
 * All done, except the "equivalent to £375" point. I've used Template:Inflation which only goes to 2019 - let me know if this should be changed to a static "equivalent to x in 2021" Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:58, 1 July 2021 (UTC) (Also, in terms of titles, I put "Davis went on to win the title every year since 1928 to 1933." - as we know, he won more later so let me know if any amendments needed there.)

Summary

 * "Only two players entered, Joe Davis and Tom Newman and so only the final was played." - Newman, and thus just the final was contested.
 * "The match was scheduled from Monday 2 April to Friday 6 April" - don't think the day names are necessary
 * "The first three days were held at The Lounge, Shakespeare Street, Nottingham with the final two days being at the Central Hall," - being played at
 * Wikilink the term break to the appropriate article for non-snooker readers
 * "and then took the first two in the evening to take the lead 14–13." - there's a word missing from this sentence
 * "Newman, however, took the last three in the afternoon" - same issue as above
 * All done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:59, 1 July 2021 (UTC)