Talk:1938 Polish ultimatum to Lithuania/GA1

GA Review
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The long wait is over! I'm going to review this GA nom! Intothewoods29 (talk) 21:18, 30 July 2008 (UTC)

I think this nom has passed! It fulfills all of the GA requirements IMO:

1.wording is fairly clear, well organized 2. plenty of reliable refs 3. stays on topic 4.neutral 5.stable 6. picture has tags

My suggestions for FA: fix the first two sentences in the lead; the first is redundant (you clarify later on) and the second is confusing that early in the article. try moving it down more in the lead. (but that's just my opinion, no one's forcing you to do it.

Read through the article and make sure everything is clear for an idiot like me.

It'd also be nice to have more than one picture, maybe a snapshot of the ulitmatum or some of the key signers, etc.

Finally, you have some red links near the end of the article. Make sure to get rid of them. Congrats! Intothewoods29 (talk) 21:38, 30 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Sweet, thank you :) Renata (talk) 01:37, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

I am afraid that without mentioning of the 1927 P-L crisis I noted above, this article is not comprehensible enough for a GA status.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 20:47, 30 August 2008 (UTC)

Missing
Maybe it's me, but I don't see what Poland told Lithuania the consequences of not accepting this ultimatum would be, in this article. What were they? Dr. Dan (talk) 00:47, 5 August 2009 (UTC)