Talk:1940 South Carolina hurricane/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: – Juliancolton  &#124; Talk 02:05, 6 January 2010 (UTC)

Placing this on-hold for now. Thanks for your efforts on the article so far. – Juliancolton  &#124; Talk 02:05, 6 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks good in general. I noticed a few areas that could do with some improvement:
 * The lead seems rather brief. As the article is fairly sizable, two paragraphs of info are probably more suitable.
 * A few more meteorological details would be good, if possible. For example, the date of the hurricane's deterioration into a tropical storm.
 * I have added the detail about its downgrade to a tropical storm, and added 2 1/2 lines into the lead. With the lead one paragraph long, and the article below it 5 paragraphs long, are you sure we need a second paragraph of a lead?  I'm worried that instead of summarizing the article below that we'd be copying increasing amounts of content into the lead.  Thegreatdr (talk) 13:54, 9 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Good point. I'm going ahead and passing the article, nice work. – Juliancolton  &#124; Talk 15:49, 9 January 2010 (UTC)